Friday, March 28, 2014
First Draft
MANUSCRIPT TENSION
The manuscript for the
fourth novel in my Westfall plantation series is with my editor Steven Bauer.
I’ll be on pins and needles until it returns with his comments. I’m worried
that the concept may be slipshod. Or the characters don’t ring true. Or the
plot doesn’t make sense. Or it’s too slow. Too elliptical. Too dull. Too
disjointed. Too artificial.
When I first started
writing, I thought whatever I got down on paper, whether poem, short story, or
essay, had meaning. I was proud of my work. As I’ve attended workshops over the
years I have come to realize that what’s meaningful writing to me may have no
more than one admirer. My confidence in my writing may have been a touch of
solipsism, perhaps the consequence of growing up in a rural area where there
was less interaction with people. To clarify, I’m talking about meaningful
writing, which I don’t equate with good writing. It’s easier to identify good
writing (in the sense of grammatical, logical, structurally sound) than
meaningful writing.
Tastes differ. There are as
many opinions as there are people, which makes meaningful writing a moving
target. It’s as hard to create as a beautiful song or an engaging movie.
Regardless of how long I work on a manuscript or how often I rewrite (and I
can’t count the times), I’m no judge of my own work. Obviously I’ve sent to
Steven what I think is a workable story with real characters. I feel like I’ve
lived with these characters for over ten years. I’ve experienced the events
that occur in the book. This may not mean I’ve fashioned an interesting story.
I’ll have some confidence in this if Steven’s comments are positive.
Another thing I’ve
discovered from workshops is that words naturally equivocate. By that I mean
that I can write a paragraph that is perfectly clear to me, but when it’s read
to a group of other writers, different meanings can come from all directions.
There are usually about eight writers attending our workshops, not usually the
same people. What I hope for is a good response from a majority. I don’t know
how other workshops go, but a subdued response is not a good one with our
group. If a work arouses interest, it’s obvious.
Enough about writing. I’m
off for a week with my grandchildren. I doubt if I’ll be worrying about my manuscript
while keeping a handle on Ava (10 years old), Frank (7 years old) and Marlon (6
years old).
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